Post by Akatsuki Dizzy on Apr 19, 2005 16:01:22 GMT -5
Alright, I finished my speech for English ow and I'm going to post it up here and have you guys tell me what I need to change in it and give me a score. Also I don't want a "nice job 50/50" I Want a real score because my teacher can be hard if you're not being persuasive enough, well sometimes. But yeah please leave a comment and a score out of 50 points. 50=A 45=B 40=C(passing) 39 and below is a redo speech.
Aliens, the movie, the myth, the reality. “But are aliens actually real”, you might wonder, but the only answer I can give you is – if you choose to believe in them. You may see aliens as a joke, or just a thing in movies that’s good for a Science Fiction fanatic or even the geek who likes Star Trek. But is it possible that they are indeed real beings that have viewed us for years.
Ever heard of “the grays”? Probably not, but this is one of the many alien races we’re aware of. Yes, that’s right, we’ve known about aliens and their races. Yet the government decides to cover it up from us. Ever wonder why there are so many alien related movies and games? It’s to make things that we might hear in places to seem fake. Let’s take the big crash near Roswell. We recovered a UFO and an alien body. There was a video later released to the public showing Russian scientists dissecting the alien body. But obviously we, the public, shouldn’t have seen that. So a movie was quickly made with a recreation of that movie to make the people believe it was a hoax.
What about the abductions people claim to have happen to them, we obviously can’t forget those. An abduction is when, well, you’re abducted. So do you think this could’ve happened to someone at school? No right? Wrong, it could’ve easily happened to anyone here at school. It all depends on what they know. Say they have a family history of being abducted; they have a 98% chance of being abducted as well. Wanna know how you can tell? Ever see someone with some strange marking on their body that couldn’t be explained with a tattoo or a birth mark? Well chances are they’ve been abducted and that’s the scar they were left with.
Let’s say we have a new student. Let’s call him Bob. Well Bob’s different, not real different. He looks like everyone else, acts like everyone else except, he claims to have seen a UFO. There’s a good chance all of you would just laugh at him if he said that. But what if he actually did see a UFO? Well you would’ve been buying into the cover ups. See the government’s great and all, except, they haven’t told us about how they have records of over 200 UFO sightings each year in the U.S. alone.
So, aliens, should you believe it or not? Well, it’s your choice, but there’s solid evidence of their existence and their connection to things here. There are also video tapes and records of real aliens and UFO’s. We’ve kept the remains of UFO crashes all over. Yet with everything out for the public now, the movies and games, it’s hard for someone to believe that aliens are actually real beings that watch us at times. So I guess it’s up to you to decide, either believe the reality of aliens and UFO’s and stop hiding behind the government’s lies or just believe that all aliens and UFO’s are, are just really old things that are over used in movies and games that we’ve seen for years.
Enjoy
Aliens, the movie, the myth, the reality. “But are aliens actually real”, you might wonder, but the only answer I can give you is – if you choose to believe in them. You may see aliens as a joke, or just a thing in movies that’s good for a Science Fiction fanatic or even the geek who likes Star Trek. But is it possible that they are indeed real beings that have viewed us for years.
Ever heard of “the grays”? Probably not, but this is one of the many alien races we’re aware of. Yes, that’s right, we’ve known about aliens and their races. Yet the government decides to cover it up from us. Ever wonder why there are so many alien related movies and games? It’s to make things that we might hear in places to seem fake. Let’s take the big crash near Roswell. We recovered a UFO and an alien body. There was a video later released to the public showing Russian scientists dissecting the alien body. But obviously we, the public, shouldn’t have seen that. So a movie was quickly made with a recreation of that movie to make the people believe it was a hoax.
What about the abductions people claim to have happen to them, we obviously can’t forget those. An abduction is when, well, you’re abducted. So do you think this could’ve happened to someone at school? No right? Wrong, it could’ve easily happened to anyone here at school. It all depends on what they know. Say they have a family history of being abducted; they have a 98% chance of being abducted as well. Wanna know how you can tell? Ever see someone with some strange marking on their body that couldn’t be explained with a tattoo or a birth mark? Well chances are they’ve been abducted and that’s the scar they were left with.
Let’s say we have a new student. Let’s call him Bob. Well Bob’s different, not real different. He looks like everyone else, acts like everyone else except, he claims to have seen a UFO. There’s a good chance all of you would just laugh at him if he said that. But what if he actually did see a UFO? Well you would’ve been buying into the cover ups. See the government’s great and all, except, they haven’t told us about how they have records of over 200 UFO sightings each year in the U.S. alone.
So, aliens, should you believe it or not? Well, it’s your choice, but there’s solid evidence of their existence and their connection to things here. There are also video tapes and records of real aliens and UFO’s. We’ve kept the remains of UFO crashes all over. Yet with everything out for the public now, the movies and games, it’s hard for someone to believe that aliens are actually real beings that watch us at times. So I guess it’s up to you to decide, either believe the reality of aliens and UFO’s and stop hiding behind the government’s lies or just believe that all aliens and UFO’s are, are just really old things that are over used in movies and games that we’ve seen for years.
Enjoy